It is March and winter has returned... with snow, ice, and chilling cold... currently there's a snowstorm outside... I start to suspect that summer will never come this year.
My first attempt to write poetry in English (which I have a limited knowledge of), and the first time I post poetry in public. All help, feedback, suggestion, and criticism is more than welcome, especially regarding:
- Does the lack of punctuation / capitalisation fit the poem, or take away from it?
- Does it flow well, or should some parts be changed? I feel that the last two lines are the weak part of the poem. Is that so, and if yes, what is your suggestion?